Integrating sources and essay example

Using the pages 54-58 in Real Questions, you will be adding/changing some source material for your essay.

1.  Look at the bullited list on p. 54 that starts with "introduce quotations". You may need to add a source or if you have the material in your draft, do it directly to the draft. Do the following:
1. integrate a quotation with some of your own words
2. add a page number to a source
3. use ellipsis in a source you have cited
4. Use square brackets
5. Add a quotation that has to be "set apart" (see p. 55)
6. Sandwich a quotation (see p. 55)
7. Look at the example on p. 56 at the top of the page (Version 1). Take one of your cited sources and create a version 1 and a version 2.
8. Look at the bulleted list on p. 56 that starts with "readers might interpret", select one of the examples and incorporate something like it into your essay. You do NOT need to use the exact language but you do need to capture the contrast effect.
9. Qualify one of your claims with one of the bulleted possibilities at the bottom of p. 56.
10. Look at the transitions discussed under "effective language" and the list at the beginning of the book, and add at least three to your essay.
11. Make sure all these changes are cited correctly. 
12. Mark each change with a number that corresponds to the numbers above.
2.  http://www.stlcc.edu/Student_Resources/Academic_Resources/Writing_Resources/Writing_Handouts/Rhetorical-Analysis-Sample-Essay.pdf Go to this link.
3. The column on the right side of the essay explains what each paragraph is doing. This is called Glossing.  Gloss your own draft.  
4. Begin adding paragraphs to your essay that reflect the glosses in the example.